"The Thieving Hand"
The article I have chosen to analyse is reviewing a surreal film called "the thieving hand" made in 1908. The review talks about comparing J.Stuart Blackton's previous work and then goes on to talk about the plot and content of the film. The writing content is reader friendly it is short but gets straight to the point. The text is in some parts maybe to brief it seems very rushed. The pictures used are limited, as only 2 photos have been used. Also the pictures used could have more meaning to them and maybe have references. In our article we would use more screen shots to give a clear analysis and appeal to a large audience. The layout seems simple and rushed again, when producing our article we would have a cleaner layout. When putting in pictures we would ensure that the layout would have the text and pictures intertwined. When writing our article we want to keep the length at a reasonable size, making sure not to repeat ourselves or use overly simple language. But on our magazine page we will make sure its colourful and also that we could involve some extras, such as behind the scenes pictures. Also i our review we could ask the audience magazine readers to give their opinion. These features would make the article more personal and also get the audience involved and film apart of the film.
By Amy Greenaway
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