Internal. House, Hallway Morning
Establishing shot
The scene is filled with a house and its surroundings the house doesn’t overwhelm. It is a conventional home and ensures safety.
Zoom
The house now only fills the shot the surrounding are now out of shot.
Zoom
The door is the main feature of the shot.
The door slowly opens in a accidental way
The inside of the house is exposed
A man appears beyond the doorway, he is wearing a premium quality suit he is not a threat and wears a smile. He eyes are tired, tired of the usual 9 to 5. He picks up his keys.
External. Garden, Road. Morning
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Reverse shot
The man is standing in the doorway of his home his car can be seen within the background of the shot
Cut
The man is now walking towards his car in a routinely fashion
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Mid shot
He is now opening the car door reluctantly
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Mid shot
Man enters the car
Internal. Car. Morning
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Eye line shot
Man sitting in drivers seat, his eyes are fixed on the road
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Wide shot
The two front seats and driver can be seen in the shot
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Wide shot
The man can be seen reversing in a cautious fashion
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Long shot
A shot of the car with the man inside concentrating on the road in front of him
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Pan
The car drives across the screen leisurely
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Long shot
Another shot of the car moving
Cross cutting between the following two scenes
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Mid shot
Man sitting in driving seat
Cut
Extreme close up
The mans face is in profile
Zoom
The mans face is in profile, same expression
Pan
His face is slightly more exposed
Pan
His entire face is now revealed
Zoom
Close up
The shot is focused on his open right eye
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Close up
The shot is focused on his right eye, closer than the first shot. His has the same expression throughout the scene
External. Estate. Morning
Long shot
The shot contains a typical brick wall
Pan slowly to the right
The wall is now seen from a slightly different angle
Pan continues
Woman’s feet walk into the shot
Pan continues
Woman’s feet now walk out of the shot casually
Cut
Long take
The woman is walking casually. Her torso fills the shot. The woman is wearing rosary beads around her neck; this can be seen moving from side to side.
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Long take
The woman is now being shown from a different angle, her lower back a legs are in shot. Within the grip of her hand is a playing card, the ace of spades. She is walking on a path.
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The woman is still holding the card in her hand, with her back to the camera
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She raises the card to her chest; the front of her body is on the camera
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A shot is taken from the back of her head; she is looking to the card
Point of view shot
The ace of spades card is in her hands
Cut
Close up
She is now facing away from the camera; her hair is long and full of flowers
Long take
The girl walks away with her hair dancing in the breeze, petals float to the ground and create a path of flowers. She drops the ace of spades card, which then floats to the ground along with the petals
Cut
Close up
Long take
The back of the girl’s head is shown
She turns her head to the left and back to the centre
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Zoom out
Cut
Girl is in same positions
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Tracking shot
The girl is standing in the middle of the road, her facial expressions remains calm until towards the end of the shot her expression changes to show she is shocked or scared
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Mid shot
Girl seems to be floating, petals are floating and she is almost dancing
Fade to white
Fade in
Extreme close up
Long take
Man’s eye is closed
Man’s eyes gradually open
Zoom out
Man’s face gradually is revealed
Long take
A shocked expression is written on his face, his hands cover his face and mouth.
Once his hands fall from his face revealing blood on his face and hands
Cut
Mid shot
Back of man’s head. Background of shot a dress is on the road with petals scattered, a puddle of blood is on the floor where the head would be situated
Mid shot
High angle shot
The dress is lying on the floor wearing rosary beads and smothered in petals
Tilt downwards
This reveals the bottom of the dress
Continues to tilt downwards
Reveals more of the dress, ace of spades is on the floor along with petals
Cut
Wide shot
An angle from the side of the road looking at the dress
Cut
Man is sitting on chair in the middle of the road seen from behind the man. The girl lay where the empty dress once was along with the petals and rosary beads
Transition to black
High angle
The girl body is misshaped and motionless. Her face is out of shot
Transition to black
High angle
Her body is shown from the top of her body and includes her legs, again she lays motionless
Cut
Extreme close up
The shot shows half of her face. Her eyes are tightly closed
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Extreme close up
Face is in same position her eyes suddenly open
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Long take
Time lapse
Her distorted body starts to slowly move and rise from the blood stained road. She rises from the road and starts to walk towards the car where the man remains sitting in the drivers seat. The girl then places her arm into the car and takes a key.
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Point of view shot
Her hand is shown hold a key
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Close up
Girls face. Tongue is stuck out the key is then placed on her tongue. Her tongue along with the key retract back into her mouth
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Wide shot
Long take
The girl is standing in the middle of the road
Wide shot
An empty road
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Wide shot
A basket appears in the middle of the road
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Long take
Man gets out of car, stands and looks for the girl with a confused expression. Brakes down and falls to the floor.
Fade to black
Man in the church kneeling on the floor
Camera moves forward and backwards track and dolly
Flickers between two shots
Man kneeling, man kneeling with blood on the back of his shirt
Mid shot
Long take
Girl walks towards camera, kneels down to pick the basket up and reappears into the shot
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Long shot
Girl walks into shot, a candle is not lit and in the middle of the road
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Extreme close up
The girls face fills the shot; the candle is directly under her nose
The girl exhales smoke falls to the candle
The candle is now lit
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Mid shot
The girl puts the lit candle in her basket
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The girl picks the apple from a tree
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Mid shot
The girl then bites into the apple
Long shot
After she has bit the apple, her lips have bright red lipstick on them
The girl puts the apple into her basket
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Time lapse
Man is in forest crawling, two doctor walk beside the man
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Long shot
Girl walks over to tree, finds a box covered with leaves. She moves the leaves of the box and opens. Inside the box a heart is revealed with the key she swallowed on the heart. She picks up the heart cautiously, looks at it and puts in her basket.
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The man is lying down on the floor of the forest. Dead petals and leaves are falling on the man
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Time lapse
Girl walking dreamily
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Man is lying on the ground leaves covering his entire body
Girl takes a bunch of flowers off his chest and starts to rip off the petals
Cut
Time lapse
Girl walks away
Fade out
Flash of light extreme
Black screen
Credits
By Amy Greenaway
