2. Were there any elements you thought we could have improved upon?
Most people that I asked believed that the sound was the weakest element. We did not see the sound as the most important element, however, we found that some people found it difficult to follow the plot and therefore we did look into different means of telling the story in a surrealist way and found that a poem was the best way of doing it. The poem is poetic and reflects the plot in a suitable way. We also added a subtle piano sound in the background to help add some more tension to the whole film and it also helps to lift it and gives it some personality that it lacked before. Here are some of the quotes -
"I think it lacks some atmosphere as some scenes, such as when the man is in the car, the meaning could be made clearer in one way or another"
"There is something interesting about there being no sound what so ever however, as surrealism is not known by the majority of people, it may help to have an extra element to make it look more professional"
"I would suggest adding a spoken element to add something different to the story"
From these results we -
- Added a spoken poem to compliment the plot
- Created a subtle soundtrack to go alongside it.
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